- too much violence. "Also, it appears to be written mostly in ancient Hebrew."
- too much talk of begatting and not enough "on the begatting process" -- "our readers like a bit of tit and cock."
- a suggested appeal to the sci-fi market by the inclusion of a "a scene with lasers and a couple of androids."
- abandoning the fantasy market for some 'chick lit.'
Link: 'God versus the publishers' - Will Type For Food